The prompt at Kellie Elmore’s Free Write Friday this week is a title, and we’ve been asked to use one of the following offerings as inspiration:
“Dandelion Season”
“Phone Call at Midnight”
“The Green Years”
“The Human Zoo”
“The Fires of Spring”
“The Ivy Covered Gate”
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A Phone Call At Midnight
What good can come from a phone call
At midnight?
Thump-thmp …
The alarm raised, my
Senses brace …
Thump-thmp …
Heart races;
Mind whirls …
Thump-thmp … thump-thmp …
Surreal perception
Balance lost …
Thump-thmp …
Siren sounds the night
Is but a bell by day …
Thump-thmp …
“Everything okay, dear?”
Thump-thmp
“Just called to say I love you …”
Thump-thmp … thump-thmp … thump-thmp …
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Thanks for visiting …
Be well,
Dorothy
©Dorothy Chiotti, Aimwell CreativeWorks 2013
Dorothy — we definitely are of on mind my friend — wonderful poem!!!
Yours also. I love a happy ending … 😉
Never expected the end as phone call at midnight do not often bring good news 🙂
awww I love that last part! So sweet! xoxoxoxoxo
Thanks, Kellie. An unexpected ending. I like those the best. … Be well, Dorothy 🙂
Nicely done!
Thank you … 🙂
Yes, I’ve had those moments, awoken only to find the caller didn’t realize how late it was. A great twist.
Thank you! Glad you liked it. … 🙂
You built the tension beautifully in so few lines, Dorothy … glad the ‘call at midnight’ turned out to be a loving one!
Thanks, Cheryl. So am I … 😉
Such a lovely twist at the end! Refreshing take on this prompt Dorothy 🙂
Thanks, Talicha. Glad you enjoyed it … 🙂
I always do 🙂