Here we have another #Free Write Friday challenge from Kellie Ellmore.
It’s high noon. Sun blazing. You awake in a field and birds are pecking your skin… GO!
~*~
The Source
Get serious …
Really?
What am I doing out in the middle of
A field in the mid-day
Sun being pecked at
By a flock of …
Finches?
Yellow,
Like the Sun.
Pretty and
Bored.
Pretty bored if they’ve got nothing better to do than
Peck at my salty flesh for no
Apparent reason. Unless,
Of course, I’m a reliable
Source of
Sodium.
Reliable, perhaps,
But not altogether
Appropriate.
Hey!
That tickles …
~*~
©Dorothy Chiotti, Aimwell CreativeWorks 2013
Shedding Light on the Family Tree 
lol I love your humor and the last line is adorable! 🙂 Thank you for writing for FWF! See you next week? 🙂
My pleasure. It’s been a great exercise for honing my creative tools. … 😉
Dorothy … loved the poem … I wanted to do a numerous take … but it just didn’t go that way today … enjoyed the ending!
Thanks! I actually wrote the ending first. Look forward to reading your interpretation. 🙂
Great, fun and like the style (structure) you used. Thanks Dorothy.
Thanks, Mike. I had fun writing it. 🙂
Ah Dorothy, great work! I rather enjoyed the humor you provided. 🙂
Thanks, Talicha. 🙂
No problem
Loved this Dorothy! Great take on the prompt!
Thanks, Mark! 🙂
A fun poem, Dorothy! In the middle of the field, just how did you get there 🙂
That’s what I’d like to know … 😉 … Thanks for the comment and visit.
Ended reading this with a chuckle. An unexpected ending 🙂
Thanks, Colline. You never know where the Muse will take you. 😉